Eaglepaw wip
Mar 4, 2014 16:02:35 GMT -6
Post by Eaglepaw on Mar 4, 2014 16:02:35 GMT -6
Name(s): Eaglekit Eaglepaw Eagle____ Eaglestar
Gender: Tom
Age: 7 moons
Clan: SkyClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: A maine coon tom
Personality: (at least 6 decent sentences)
History: Rats have always been a problem in SkyClan. It's something you grow used to after so long. But I think the problem had got far too out of control when my mentor, Flowerleg, was mutilated by rats. I can remember them swarming over her, biting and tearing her apart. What could I do? Nothing. I had just began my training... Hawkwing worked so hard to save her, but she soon died. The wounds were too great; the infection had spread. She was taken from me, just like my mother had been taken from greencough.
Bengalstorm became my new mentor. He had Adderpaw at the time. She was so good at being warrior; she did everything perfectly, while I look like dirt. She often played tricks on me, I don't think she liked me very much. I scared her one day, but the score is still like 1/30. Bengalstorm kept pushing me, it was like override. Constant training. Constant fighting. Everyday I have to drag myself out of that nest and work with tired, aching muscles. I'm so clumsy...
When Adderpaw became Adderstep, he had even more time for me, which was even more training. Sure, I got stronger and my endurance increased, but I'm still clumsier than ever. He says I'm getting better but I think he's lying to make me feel better. Not sure. Bengalstorm became deputy, and said we have to leave. Rollingstar disagreed. Bengalstorm actually challenged him, and he backed down. Will StarClan accept Bengalstorm and give him his nine lives? Rollingstar is still alive.. Oh well. I guess we're leaving. I never liked this place anyways.
Characters: Snowfire, Nocturne, Requiem
Gender: Tom
Age: 7 moons
Clan: SkyClan
Rank: Apprentice
Appearance: A maine coon tom
Personality: (at least 6 decent sentences)
History: Rats have always been a problem in SkyClan. It's something you grow used to after so long. But I think the problem had got far too out of control when my mentor, Flowerleg, was mutilated by rats. I can remember them swarming over her, biting and tearing her apart. What could I do? Nothing. I had just began my training... Hawkwing worked so hard to save her, but she soon died. The wounds were too great; the infection had spread. She was taken from me, just like my mother had been taken from greencough.
Bengalstorm became my new mentor. He had Adderpaw at the time. She was so good at being warrior; she did everything perfectly, while I look like dirt. She often played tricks on me, I don't think she liked me very much. I scared her one day, but the score is still like 1/30. Bengalstorm kept pushing me, it was like override. Constant training. Constant fighting. Everyday I have to drag myself out of that nest and work with tired, aching muscles. I'm so clumsy...
When Adderpaw became Adderstep, he had even more time for me, which was even more training. Sure, I got stronger and my endurance increased, but I'm still clumsier than ever. He says I'm getting better but I think he's lying to make me feel better. Not sure. Bengalstorm became deputy, and said we have to leave. Rollingstar disagreed. Bengalstorm actually challenged him, and he backed down. Will StarClan accept Bengalstorm and give him his nine lives? Rollingstar is still alive.. Oh well. I guess we're leaving. I never liked this place anyways.
Characters: Snowfire, Nocturne, Requiem